Sink Or Swim? Comments

My mind is bitter but my memories are sweet. My thoughts are variable but feelings are constant. My mind says you are nothing, my heart says you are something everything. a fine poem written so well using contrasts to denote how difficult it is. the feeling of attraction, infatuation.. beautifully portrayed. than ku. tony

My mind says swim across this ocean is the ocean this episode in your life, involving You, the 'man' and me, the woman? are you the woman, really? [you don't need to tell EVERYONE; I THINK i know] is your 'intellect' telling you to Let him go, forget him, get over him! ! ! ? BUT your 'darn' heart...[mine just pumps my blood]....is holding you down/back in the past? ? ? (cont.)

Wow! I love your heartbreaking and stunning write of the reality of loving a complex man that is always fascinating but emotionally it is a rollercoaster! !