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A ‘frenzy that departed soon! '.. poetic words

Beautiful poem Salini with interesting lines... It sprinkled and departed Long time of sensation Visual that revert some emptiness Even the rays will lapse something Frenzy part that departed soon! ! ! ! ! when unexpected rains falls, we are not prepared, but when it goes, it leaves some emptiness behind. Loved it.

In every line of the poem the creativity is superb and still I most likes the lines from Started shower in trembled way to Decides to withdraw to a parasol felt most interesting. The poetic skill of the poetess is really amazing and appreciated in such sense of literary interest.

skillfully woven poem nice to read and feel

'It sprinkled and departed Long time of sensation'. Nicely envisioned.Thanks.

Sometimes rains come in odd hours like an unexpected guest creating a few problems but when they go back the house lacks there beauty and we feel some emptiness.

When rain falls unexpected, we may not be prepared for it! But somehow it gives a cool effect and revives the parched lands with vegetation, though may not last for long! Great write!

Long time of sensation, good writing, thanks.

A very well crafted piece indeed having beautiful metaphor of life...........amazing write

Title itself is so beautiful even stones are wet when sunk in water and when taken out - its dry nice poem

it is really outstanding.................honestly, this poem shall surely have a great impact on every reader..................so so nice..........that i can't even write more about it................thanks for sharing this poignant poem.