Sunday, April 17, 2011

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Tainted rich men they are,
Their riches keep increasing
Poverty is no birthright of the poor’s
But they still sleep on pavements
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Jameel Ahmed Ansari
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Erica Borges 13 August 2012

I like your passion in this poem, but I'm sorry to break it to you...government itself is bad. Any type of government is bad because it uses violence to gain power. Physical and mental violence. So don't wish your country becomes bigger and more powerful. Instead, wish and work for a place where everyone is treated and seen as equals.

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Zoya Khalid 29 April 2012

U r quite a patriot...the poem is beautiful.....and very well reflects how you are as a person.This is praiseworthy.

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Bella Stylos 30 January 2012

First I liked the title, den the way it relates! the rich getting rich the poor getting screwed! I lov the imageries it pointed out some symbolic phenomena In the third world country not jusr india alone

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majid Alsaady 19 April 2011

u'v drawn the vivid picture of everyday life in all nations / donot by all means think that it is only in ur country / the poor strife to get little to live / the poets picture should be outside rules. thanks dear and honor'ble poet.

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