Monday, November 9, 2015

Sinister Minister.... [sinners! ; Group Psychology; Crime & Consequences! ! ; Long; Fantasy] Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had just finished embezzling a hundred grand from my firm.
I’d stopped at a bar for a drink after work, feeling like a worm.
I was an accountant for a Fortune 500 company. They had PLENTY of money,
but, though the cash solved ONE problem, I WASN’T feeling sunny.
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Bharati Nayak 25 March 2024

Though an imaginary poem, it is based on realistic situations.

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Bharati Nayak 25 March 2024

We are all sinners in some way or other as Bri says in his poem a tag was hung on his neck for the purported sin.

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Bharati Nayak 25 March 2024

You have rightly pointed to the group psychology.When sinners are in one place, they feel their burden less heavy and having a way out to unload the sins, it seems even lighter.(Part-1)

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Kim Barney 25 March 2024

Amazingly amusing, Bri!

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Bri Edwards 25 March 2024

(cont.) **** or ***** definition of 'PONY UP': 'US informal. to pay (a particular amount of money) for something: As well as putting up his own cash, he persuaded others to pony up.'

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Bri Edwards 25 March 2024

I GUESS IT IS AGAIN TIME TO VISIT 'JOSH' [[ AND THE BABE IN THE RED HAT ]], ....AND TO 'PONY UP'****. (CONT.)

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Bri Edwards 31 July 2022

(cont.) ...strangley Bharati's 2022 comment (thanks, Bharati Nayak) showed up in nonchronological order with older comments made years ago.

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Bri Edwards 25 March 2024

OOPS! ! ! i MISSPELLED 'strangely' above and just noticed it NOW, in 2024. bri : ) That goes to prove that even 'the best spellers' can make honest errors. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 31 July 2022

....Icont.) ....added 'Bri's' to the front of the title and resubmitted it. Now both may be fouond on PH, but......

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Bri Edwards 31 July 2022

In 2015 I submitted this. Yesterday I added 'Bri's

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Bharati Nayak 30 July 2022

The poem is both funny and soul stirring! Enjoyed the poem and so a five star full

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Bri Edwards 30 July 2022

Thank you past and future readers and commenters, SINNERS ALL! ! ! ;) bri

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Jak Black 13 November 2015

Enjoyed reading this producct of your ever fertile mind, Bri. Humorous, as usual. Can't say I recognise all the names mentioned, but one or two ring a bell. Thought for a while you'd entered Hell.

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Valsa George 11 November 2015

I felt as if I was watching a thriller movie! Was eager to know what would be the next move! Enjoyed the unexpected twists and turns! Witty and bedazzling!

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Loke Kok Yee 10 November 2015

are you trying to frighten me Bri? for my sins I need a thumbdrive! thanks

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Seema Jayaraman 09 November 2015

whew.. what an awesome read.. very witty.. was not sure whether the experience was that of post departing ie after death or the poor guy was still on earth.. thanks for sharing. need to re-read again.

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Eugene Levich 09 November 2015

Bri- I knew they'd catch on to you sooner or later! Fun poem!

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