Sunday, September 6, 2015

Singular Identity Or Plural Enigmas Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some mornings I can see the rising sun
Has moved a tittle,
Just a little,
Beyond the terrace that has blocked
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Ananta Madhavan
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Valsa George 15 September 2015

Yes, we all have a singular identity, but plural enigmas as the clouds 'mysteriously transcend their identities and resemble as a whale or a camel in the sky. You have found your identity as a 'swara' or a tone in a symphonic Mass or Psalm or Hymn! A highly philosophical write in beautiful diction with catchy images like the sky seen as a ' palette of hues in subtly shaded continents of cloud'! But the fridge part stands disparate.... a little aloof from the main body of thought in the poem! May be it is above what I can comprehend! Great write!

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