Single Waters.... Comments

an interesting title.. and so was the poem, , , , nice, ,

The pathos and metaphoric elements combine perfectly; this poem flows as well as good water! Definately a poem of living...

The sense of loss is so powerfully expressed by the metaphor of dripping water, relentless, punctuated by pain but ending in a weary resignation. A very fine poem.

A beautiful metaphor of existentialism - droplets of water draining into a disused well. We at our lowest possibly to feel disuse, at least used we are connected. Sad and poignant.