Friday, May 29, 2009

Single’s Surfeit......Marry Nay Merry! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Parishes seek thee done.
Snatch thinner life’s fun.

Wife be cherished moor?
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saadat tahir
COMMENTS
Meena Mustafa 29 June 2012

. Hahahah.Definitely food for thought for those who are single :)

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Catrina Heart 07 June 2009

A well structured satirical poem crafted in running couplets with fine end rhymes......Nice theme! 10

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Duh Huh 06 June 2009

Definitely funny and witty with a well heaped spoonful of sarcasm. Well done and thank you for sharing :)

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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2009

funny crispy poem, Saadat...not to forget to mention the sarcastic wisdom inside...thanks...10

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Seema Chowdhury 03 June 2009

a different and thought provoking poem.

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Linda Ori 03 June 2009

Certainly a dilemma - freedom, or commitment? One needs to weigh the pros and cons, which you are doing (if I read this correctly) in this poem. Definitely food for thought (for all singles) ! Linda :)

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Pramod Thomas 03 June 2009

good one my dear friend you are amazing

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Indira Babbellapati 02 June 2009

couplets of fun...whr from can i manage 20 characters, tahir?

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Eyan Desir 01 June 2009

this was kinda funny

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 May 2009

Hello Sadaat that was well expressed indeed...poem with great depth..Like the rhyming couplets too, ...concise and up to the point....nice one thanks Saadat..10+++ regards/with love shan

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