Sunday, January 31, 2010

Single Mother... Comments

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Single mother, I applaud thee,
For you are rare jewels, a precious commodity.
Taking on more than you can possibly bear,
Expanding your mind farther than you can comprehend.
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Lana Grissom
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Marieta Maglas 10 February 2010

''Guided by faith, so your heart is content I know you often cry at night, thinking of how your life should be sent'' nice poem dedicated to a mother, nice rhymes, nice new style in poetry, thank you for sharing.... 10/10/10/10 Mari

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Nikunj Sharma 02 February 2010

Hey Lana this is such a touching piece, sensitive, socially relevant and tributary in nature. I am sure all single mothers would be proud of you. I found it highly descriptive, thought provoking and heart warming....just check out the spelling of strength in the last line of 3 rd stanza....

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