Death is a single lady,
a workaholic,
a professional traveling agent,
who does not delegate her work.
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A great metaphor. The poem's tone is clear and detached. A well-written poem!
Your lines are crisp with sterility which makes sense since you seem to be glorifying extinction. Interesting tactic.
Thank you for your comment. I don't feel I'm glorifying extinction, but maybe rather death which sooner or latter comes to us all. At any case thanks for your view.
marvelous imagery ' death will love it as it approaches me I shall keep this in mind then the end FULL STOP!
I thank you for reading and grasping my description of death. Best to you.
A refined poetic imagination, Luz H. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
A most touching poem about a single lady who died recently. May she rest in peace, dear Luz! She would pamper us all, if she may have the opportunity. A fantastic poem.
It's actually about death. Death is described as the single lady (first line) . Thank you for reading.
A well executed piece, dear Ma’am Luz.....10+++
I appreciate your support.