Tuesday, August 21, 2018

Single Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

Death is a single lady,
a workaholic,
a professional traveling agent,
who does not delegate her work.
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Luz H.
COMMENTS
Bernard F. Asuncion 03 December 2019

A well executed piece, dear Ma’am Luz.....10+++

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Luz Hanaii 05 December 2019

I appreciate your support.

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Mihaela Pirjol 31 October 2018

A great metaphor. The poem's tone is clear and detached. A well-written poem!

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Crayon Poet 20 September 2018

Your lines are crisp with sterility which makes sense since you seem to be glorifying extinction. Interesting tactic.

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Luz Hanaii 07 October 2018

Thank you for your comment. I don't feel I'm glorifying extinction, but maybe rather death which sooner or latter comes to us all. At any case thanks for your view.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 September 2018

marvelous imagery ' death will love it as it approaches me I shall keep this in mind then the end FULL STOP!

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Luz Hanaii 19 September 2018

I thank you for reading and grasping my description of death. Best to you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 September 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Luz H. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 August 2018

A most touching poem about a single lady who died recently. May she rest in peace, dear Luz! She would pamper us all, if she may have the opportunity. A fantastic poem.

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Luz Hanaii 02 September 2018

It's actually about death. Death is described as the single lady (first line) . Thank you for reading.

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