Tuesday, May 27, 2008

' Sing Something For Me Comments

Rating: 3.0

Sing something for me, sing,
while of yours think fly as dandelions.
Sing something for me, sing,
while the rain still rings only for us,
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Tsira Gogeshvili
COMMENTS
Patti Masterman 25 December 2011

Merry Christmas to you and thank you for this poem, Tsira..may all good blessings flow your way in the new year.. :)

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Miriam Maia Padua 02 November 2011

Lovely... a poem with not just a song but a melody.. very lovely to listen while reading or humming... touching yet very heart-warming... a lively write...

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Abolfazl Ahmadi 02 October 2011

song of life is sung by our pure soul. so sing the song and nature sing four you

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Miroslava Odalovic 24 August 2011

I swear I did this morning and it sort of worked, have a nice day birdie fly don't forget to smile :) :) :)

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 24 December 2009

As wonderful as you are.. But can't say which one is more beautiful....your words or is it you? Yes, it's you. :)

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 December 2009

the last line makes the poem very natural

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 May 2009

'Sing something for me, sing, Or you will be killed from my smile.' Wow, so nice lines! 10++

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James Mclain 07 April 2009

Four two wing sings air touching tip floats softly your Butterfly.

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Sreelekha Premjit 11 February 2009

That's a killing smile and a killing poem...

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Meggie Gultiano 27 January 2009

wanted to set this into music..magical, serene and haunting.What lovely words you ahve painted here.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 November 2008

A beautiful poem indeed...!

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Sandra Fowler 15 November 2008

What would life be without a song? Beautiful write, Tsira. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 September 2008

'Sing something for me, sing, or you will be killed from my smile.' Last two lines are so moving, I love to add my 10 with it.

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Bill Thomas 31 July 2008

Beautiful, Tsira, simply beautiful.

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Gone with the wind 19 July 2008

This is awesome..now whoever sings for you must really should be killed by your smile as well your miraculous words...a magnificient composition Gul

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Kyle Shield Laster 15 July 2008

aww. i love it. killed with a smiled... too bad that's not the cause of all murders. a great write.

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Rema Prasanna 16 June 2008

It is a great feeling.... sing sing sing for me, liked it, it is wonderful to sit and listen a song on a moon fed night, rain fed day... lovely write.... Rgs Rema

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 07 June 2008

Nice one it is honor to sing a song........... good poem

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David Harris 07 June 2008

Tsira, if I could sing I would sing a lovely song for you, but alas my voice only croaks like a worn out frog. Wonderful encouraging poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Kesav Easwaran 06 June 2008

...this sunny song makes so many dandelions bloom around us...let us join tsira in her song and smile...*10*

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