Oh, my Father in Heaven,
Guarding me from all perils and trials
And sets my heart free of clutter,
For you, my songs of praise, I reserve.
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It is a great plea to Father in Heaven from your core of heart. I here cite some lines......., Oh my Father in Heaven, Guarding me from all perils and trials / And sets my heart free of clutter, / For you, my songs of praise, I reserve. All my life, I shall sing / Without fail, in bloom or gloom, . This poem is so brilliant. Thanks for sharing.
The last two stanzas depict submission and humility. A strong and encompassing prayer of guidance and assistance. So humbling verses that touch the core of.the.heart. A beautiful poem of deep faith. Wonderfully written.
Thank you Rose Marie for taking your time off to write such a detailed and inspiring comment on my poem! I have always noticed that while commenting on the works of poets, you take a sincere effort to understand the poems in every detail and you encourage each one with sincerity! Your comments are always a delight to read. In fact this poem has come from the core of my heart and I always believe that man has nothing other than what has been given by God!
The second and third stanzas dwell on God's nature and His wonderful attributes. The great Poetess recognizes these attributes through marvelous words and superb imagery. Liked these lines, to wit: " The benevolent Lord of all creation....The Master.Craftsman depicting His power: omnipotence, omniscience and omnipresent.
EXCELLENT spiritual write. A wonderful song of praise for the Lord Almighty. The first stanza captures the Poet's deep faith and strongly affirms such faith by powerful and wonderful verses. It also conveys gratefulness and a promise of eternal faith in the Lord.
Oh! Redeemer of Mankind Guide me through the dark, Guard my steps where dangers lurk Hold my hand And never loosen your grip A prayer from the heart of a devout soul. Very Good
Dillip, I tried twice to post a reply to your comment...... it is rather frustrating that I couldn’t express my gratitude to you for taking so much of your time on writing such a wonderful comment....! Am short of words to say how thankful I am..... May God bless you!
I am delighted learn that this is your 200th poem! You must have felt a different kind of satisfaction after completing this great poem! Due to some technical issues, I am not able to vote! I rate this poem very high and I would vote it some other day with a 10
In another stanza, you have brilliantly expressed what I hinted in my previous comment…”All the flowers/That bloom and wither/All things/Bright and beautiful/Everything, above and below/In all/Let me behold Thy grace/And sing Thy praise! ....Exquisitely structured, a sublime piece of poetry!
This is one of your best poems! The humbleness of poetic expression is laudably chimed in this magnificent piece of poetry! Let me pick out two stanzas, first: …..Oh, the benevolent Lord of all creation/Custodian of all wealth/Contriver of birth and death/The Master Craftsman/Everything is your handiwork….Your honest submission to God is the truth! Without his approval even wind can’t touch a leaf! (Cont….)
When ever he with me, I feel proud and loyal to Him Hold my hand And never loosen your grip In all, So to Him, with out Him This poem is a dedication to Him Let me behold Thy grace And sing Thy praise!
All my life, I shall sing Without fail, in bloom or gloom, Let my songs sail across the skies your praise of God lifted me up to the Seven Story Mountain. Valsa you love God sooooooooooo much. it is so lovely to see that an educated person like you fall in love with the Almighty. let us love God more than anything and anyone. thank you, God bless you tony
Nice poem... Give in to no second thought As it is ought For desirable result The self conscious is in built Life is natural And should not be treated as casual It should be followed with sincere approach As life needs thinking of level as such
A sweet and satisfying song of praise! Well done my friend!
Great poem, Valsa. We are all blessed indeed. Often I forget to have gratitude for God but still his mercy and love is showered upon us even in difficult times. Thank you so much for this amazing and graceful poem.
We are all blessed with this poem you have wrote for us all and you show us the meaning of gratitude..thank you and God bless...regards
Am waiting to sing Bri Edward's song of praise to God... No strings attached Bri, jxt sharing what I believe to be good to all my friends
Beautiful write, praise worthy... God is faithful and worthy of the calves of our lips. We join you in gratitude and prayer to God.
All the flowers That bloom and wither, All things Bright and beautiful...beautiful expression dear madam. A sublime piece of poetry. Top score and to my favorite!