Monday, May 13, 2019

Sing Me A Lullaby Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh precious songbird
Can you fill my mind
With your most sweetest lullaby
So your music will carry me
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Jennifer Birchall
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Jankovic Zoran 15 May 2019

Maja Anglou wrote about birds singing about freedom. You're writing about birds singing a lullaby about dreams. The freedom and dreams have the same feeling even though they are written in a different way. Great.

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Sekharan Pookkat 14 May 2019

Rhythmic flow of words Composed to reveal emotional domain is the sweetest lullaby of desires and dreams- mesmerizing metaphor

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 May 2019

A soul-soothing poem, dear Ma'am Jennifer....10+++++++++++++

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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