Oh precious songbird
Can you fill my mind
With your most sweetest lullaby
So your music will carry me
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Rhythmic flow of words Composed to reveal emotional domain is the sweetest lullaby of desires and dreams- mesmerizing metaphor
A soul-soothing poem, dear Ma'am Jennifer....10+++++++++++++
Maja Anglou wrote about birds singing about freedom. You're writing about birds singing a lullaby about dreams. The freedom and dreams have the same feeling even though they are written in a different way. Great.