Sing A Song Of Tajmahal Comments

Eid mubarak and also mubarak for the touristy poem.....tis a good way to acknowledge the grand monument.....

ek shahanshah ne bawayee thee................................/................//// but your write is more hasi(n) /beautiful than tajmahal bcoz when i think on the aspect what the grt Shayar wrote it looks ugly.but ur write 100% b'ful.10+++++

A lovely tribute to a great work, the Taj is an amazing building a true wonder of the world, this poem does a great job of celebrating it, a tribute to the Great Shah whose spirit would be pleased its power still unfolds today. Thank you for writing this inspirational work.

Shouldn't scare u just like romeo n juliet's dyin in lov doesnt scare readers. Tajmahal is a shrine built for his belovd dead wife by emperor shah jehan. And to love therefore it has become a shrine, a place of romance. Even lady Di went there.

I am confused. Is that a crypt of the dead? Otherwise it is a beautiful place, but if there are dead lovers?

It paints a clear and good picture in my mind, excellent work my friend ^, ^

This does have lovely stanza and a cute punctuating finishing theme line to each one! It's like Londoners who never visit the Tower of London etc.(Not that that us a very romantic place, but you know what I mean)

A memorable tribute, go, and enrich your life.

wonderful play of words describing the immortal beauty of tajmahal

Very beautiful write. Keep it up

gr8 words u r Indian living abroad n dint visited Tajmmehel? y? and still penned such fabulous tunes...... very impressive the metaphor n similies r gr8 thumb up

Zaynub has a persistent will to improve, if she manages to lessen narrating, her poems will be fantastic

I too love to visit there.still a dream many hundred kilometres away lol

You must have been in this touristy place. CauseI can see it and and feel it..

You are right. Mesmerizing beauty in marble, a token of eternal love.Great!

For never having been, your description of this magnificent palace is spot on! Excellent Write S.zaynub. And thank you for the kind comment/review of my own words... It pleases me that you found it enjoyable. Thank you.; -) -Kelly.

sing, sing a song, . Leave me dancing all night long. Wonderful song S.zaynub

A wonderful tribute to one of the marvels of creation and the inspirational force behind it in such sweet flowing rhyme!

Happy and sweet poem! Congratulations!

Your rhyme is wonderful when you sing your song.