Monday, July 3, 2017

Sing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sit with me in quiet harmony.
Sing to me in that haunting tone.
Convey your intensity to me
Through your plaintive melodies.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Rebecca Navarre 31 July 2017

Another Very Touching Poem! ! ! ! ! It Is Hard Sometimes To Let Acceptance, Reach, Into Heart.... But, Think, , With Time That Helps Us Grow, So We Can Share, Even More... Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ Powerful Write! ! ! ! ! Beauty Insight! ! ! ! ! Best Wishes! ! ! ! ! If..I'm misinterpreting, I am Sorry! ! ! ! ! Would Love To Hear More...Your Thoughts...For This.. You Are Wondrously Beautiful Poetess! ! ! ! !

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Suzanne Hayasaki 02 August 2017

Thank you again for taking the time to comment Rebecca!

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Suzanne Hayasaki 02 August 2017

Rebecca I was listening to a young singer-songwriter. It was not so much her words but her tone that made me imagine what she was feeling. And I found that her melodies haunted me and kind of seeped in like a mild poison, and I started to realize that she was reminding me of my younger self. And what I can tell people of her generation is that all the self doubt and disappointment just makes you try harder, and gradually you come to form your own identity. I think as I age, I have more to say. Thanks for being such a consistent reader and commenter! I really appreciate your feedback.

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Rebecca Navarre 03 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! ! ! For Sharing Your Beautifully Heart Moving Poetry! ! ! ! ! And Such A Beautifully Profound Answer! ! ! ! ! Beautiful! ! ! ! ! :)

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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