Sinful Nature Comments

Well-written with many unique and fresh descriptives that paints the picture for your readers- I am particularly thinking of these: Wrapped in your cigarette smoke, I'll spit out my heart and toss it on your ankle like a hacky-sack, and In a few years when life's dwindled down I'll want that musk again. It's just that, commitment came knocking when I was busy in the shower.

yes there are people skillful in twisting your heart to their satisfaction and yet..you miss them... maybe they're different that what's make them wanted.

Charm and wit establishes Her skill of manipulation. Beautiful expression.

Really verry verry good! ! !