Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Sinful Comments

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My world is beginning to fall apart,
I feel I will soon be lonely.
This doesn't seem to change,
Time is making a thought of stopping.
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Razya Sultana
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Ejaz Khan 01 December 2009

The title and content of your write made me smile, what possible sins could you have committed, relax, you're innocent and needs not worry about falling out of grace, He loves his creation, especially the repentants Smile! !

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Ying Escalona 01 December 2009

very good poem....thanks for sharing

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