Since You've Gone Away.... Comments

my vibrant green lawn is so full of dust I have no love nor any l.u.s.t. since you've gone away.. My lawn is full of dust since your are gone. symbolic... tony

Days are too long. This is difficult to handle life. What is wrong with you today is unknown but still mind feels the nature in different way. Beautiful blue cloud looks evil grey. Green lawn is full of dust and no love is found. Today you do not like coffee or to or play under shed. This provokes thought. But we hope you will feel God's grace and find natural love within poetic mind. This poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned...10

A marvelous poem! You could have spelled out the word l, u, s, t, in your poem. You just can't do it in a comment!