i see the dark clouds coming up again
the drops fall slowly then it begun to rain
but its ok let it fall down on me
and let it wash every single memory
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nice effort I like it. It says I'm fifteen very well and you describe how it is. - work on spelling Dana it's important.
a very good write! keep it up. i'll give it a ten because it comes from the heart.
significant and lovely wording! 10+