Wednesday, July 15, 2009

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i see the dark clouds coming up again
the drops fall slowly then it begun to rain
but its ok let it fall down on me
and let it wash every single memory
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dana XxX
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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 July 2009

significant and lovely wording! 10+

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Patrick A. Martin 20 July 2009

nice effort I like it. It says I'm fifteen very well and you describe how it is. - work on spelling Dana it's important.

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Louis Rams 15 July 2009

a very good write! keep it up. i'll give it a ten because it comes from the heart.

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