The tires on my bike are flat.
The sky is grouchy gray.
At least it sure feels like that
Since Hanna moved away.
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Heart Touching Poem being chosen again as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Very Beautiful.5 Stars full score!
Love reading once again this Modern Poem Of The Day. Congratulations once again with the TMPOTD. I have enjoyed very much! Such a loveliest poem.5 Stars full
A beautiful love poem nicely brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate..
Really a poignant piece of poetry, very powerfully and movingly penned from the heart.
Love reading once again this Modern Poem Of The Day. Congratulations once again with the TMPOTD. I have enjoyed very much! Such a loveliest poem.
The world became pretty smelly, if not totally off; pretty deflated if not as flat as a tyre can get
As a child I had a person like Hannah too, she cared for all things in the house with a motherly attention, so it's most logic that the kid is missing her so much! 5 Stars and to my Favourites.
Congratulations being chosen for the second time as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! How many times have I read this so lovely adorable poem, it hears like a song and still impressing.
I have an inkling: are you not speaking of one of my dearest poets on PoemHunter?
Touching poem, so true, if the person you love moved away, there is no more fun in daily life or strife, Hannah, the most trustworthy person. Excellent poem 5 Stars dear Judith! To my Favourites. My 'old' comment is lost here when you won the MPOTD. But you wrote amazing poems!
An amazing creation of great elegance