Monday, January 20, 2003

Since Hanna Moved Away Comments

Rating: 4.4

The tires on my bike are flat.
The sky is grouchy gray.
At least it sure feels like that
Since Hanna moved away.
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Judith Viorst
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Chinedu Dike 11 December 2024

An amazing creation of great elegance

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Richard Wlodarski 30 May 2022

Great poem. Reminds me of so many melancholic songs!

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Nabakishore Dash 24 May 2022

Excellent poem indicating pangs of separation.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 May 2022

Heart Touching Poem being chosen again as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Very Beautiful.5 Stars full score!

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Jayne Louise Davies 24 May 2022

Well done on POD. Well deserved. Loved it.

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Chinedu Dike 24 May 2022

Very heartfelt with strong emotion. A piece of great elegance.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 November 2021

Love reading once again this Modern Poem Of The Day. Congratulations once again with the TMPOTD. I have enjoyed very much! Such a loveliest poem.5 Stars full

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 November 2021

Marvellous burst of emotions. Beautiful poetry

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Sally Plumb Plumb 19 November 2021

Lovely flow to this piece

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Chinedu Dike 19 November 2021

A beautiful love poem nicely brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate..

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Chinedu Dike 18 March 2021

Really a poignant piece of poetry, very powerfully and movingly penned from the heart.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2021

Love reading once again this Modern Poem Of The Day. Congratulations once again with the TMPOTD. I have enjoyed very much! Such a loveliest poem.

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Noah Body 16 March 2021

Truly excellent write. Sorry for your pain.5 stars.

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Douglas Scotney 16 March 2021

The world became pretty smelly, if not totally off; pretty deflated if not as flat as a tyre can get

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Lyn Paul 16 March 2021

You have expressed sadness in the most beautiful way.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2021

As a child I had a person like Hannah too, she cared for all things in the house with a motherly attention, so it's most logic that the kid is missing her so much! 5 Stars and to my Favourites.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2021

Congratulations being chosen for the second time as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! How many times have I read this so lovely adorable poem, it hears like a song and still impressing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 February 2021

I have an inkling: are you not speaking of one of my dearest poets on PoemHunter?

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 February 2021

Lovely, emotionally fortified poem. Five stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2021

Touching poem, so true, if the person you love moved away, there is no more fun in daily life or strife, Hannah, the most trustworthy person. Excellent poem 5 Stars dear Judith! To my Favourites. My 'old' comment is lost here when you won the MPOTD. But you wrote amazing poems!

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