Thursday, August 11, 2011

Since An Epiphany Has Arrived Comments

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The living of life,
Can reveal bewildering moments.
Some are not as stunning as others.
But needless to say,
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Chris Haifley 11 August 2011

This is a very good poem! The subject is very true and moving. I especilly like the last stanza, when the victim is speaking. It gives a whole new view and dimention to the poem. You use an amazing choice of words throughout the poem also (: keep up the good work!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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