Wednesday, April 5, 2017

Sinbad In Baghdad (After So Many Years Of Sailing The Seas, Sinbad Decided To Settle In Baghdad) Comments

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Is this the city that I have
Tamed the perilous seas
and sailed the four corners for,
To teach people how to spell
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Istabraq Al Ahmadi
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Denis Mair 05 April 2017

Sindbad's heart is loyal to the city which is the seat of his civilization, even if his body was driven into exile. Loyalty makes him leave so he can hold that city's beauty clos to his heart. Loyalty makes him return. At times the darkness of small coffins seems more powerful than any light. If a mind is a hornet's nest, how can it learn any lessons? But love is always willing to learn lessons. Your poem weaves a fabric of beautiful thoughts because that scarred body needs the solace of love's garment.:

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Istabraq Al Ahmadi 06 April 2017

Thanks a lot Mr. Mair! I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem!

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Iraq/ Al Anbar/ Ramadi
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