1. Cool snake in soul-case
Gloomy face in the jail-cell
A sleeping sin-seed
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you know it s a special talent u got...It is been two months since i came to the site.... and you always seems to come up with special short verses....most times the format is always the same....but very innovative and enjoy them every time i read them 'Gloomy face in the jail-cell' nice rite 10+++ regards shan
Amazing imagery with plenty to ponder...Great write! Thanks, roshni.
complex and very intense imagery that captures very insightful observation of life
Wow...I have been your fan.How can you think in this way? 10+ for your thought process...Brishti Mazumdar
chosen unique title..each stanza have different themes, but there is only one conclusion..the sin-seed and others..beautiful as presented..grace
A multple faceted beast, getting new interpretations, well penned, desrves a 10++
Very powerful way of inventorying strong emotions
Ashraful, It is very melodious and classical the Haiku, you are master in this 'business'..10.. Best wishes, Tsira
Your imagery resonates. Excellent work. It would be hard to pick a favorite. Warm regards, Sandra
not haikus as SLN observed...but good short pieces...plenty of imagination inside...10
that is a beautiful poem with your unique style..10++++
Philophical thought expressed in easy way.... beatiful write and i appricaite so much,