Sunday, May 31, 2009

Sin-Seed And Others Comments

Rating: 4.7

1. Cool snake in soul-case
Gloomy face in the jail-cell
A sleeping sin-seed
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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Philophical thought expressed in easy way.... beatiful write and i appricaite so much,

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Shashendra Amalshan 08 June 2009

you know it s a special talent u got...It is been two months since i came to the site.... and you always seems to come up with special short verses....most times the format is always the same....but very innovative and enjoy them every time i read them 'Gloomy face in the jail-cell' nice rite 10+++ regards shan

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Muhammad Ali 08 June 2009

O great work daer friend! ! lovely piece of art! 10..

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Roshni D'Souza 07 June 2009

Amazing imagery with plenty to ponder...Great write! Thanks, roshni.

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Fiona Davidson 05 June 2009

Excellent piece Ashraful....10++++

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Raj Arumugam 04 June 2009

complex and very intense imagery that captures very insightful observation of life

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

Wow...I have been your fan.How can you think in this way? 10+ for your thought process...Brishti Mazumdar

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Lady Grace 01 June 2009

chosen unique title..each stanza have different themes, but there is only one conclusion..the sin-seed and others..beautiful as presented..grace

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Rommel Mark Marchan 01 June 2009

so deep thinker sir

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Ejaz Khan 01 June 2009

A multple faceted beast, getting new interpretations, well penned, desrves a 10++

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Very powerful way of inventorying strong emotions

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Tsira Goge 31 May 2009

Ashraful, It is very melodious and classical the Haiku, you are master in this 'business'..10.. Best wishes, Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 31 May 2009

Your imagery resonates. Excellent work. It would be hard to pick a favorite. Warm regards, Sandra

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Catrina Heart 31 May 2009

richly metaphorical verses...................10+++

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Ramesh T A 31 May 2009

Poetic observation of sinful things warns well to the readers!

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Kesav Easwaran 31 May 2009

not haikus as SLN observed...but good short pieces...plenty of imagination inside...10

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rago rago 31 May 2009

a fantastic write........

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beautiful haikus...unique

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Priyanka Bhowmick 31 May 2009

nice composition on sin-seed...10+

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that is a beautiful poem with your unique style..10++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq

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