Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Sin: O( Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heart filled with sorrows.
Eyes filled with tears;
I am trying to come near.
To stand in front of you.
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elsee daniel
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 18 February 2016

A nice write.Love to read time and again.

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Chitra - 08 November 2009

sin and acceptance of the same is another route to divine realization well done!

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 06 November 2009

you are selected every words with very careful..nice

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Nivrutti Avhad 06 November 2009

fantastic poem indeed nice to read

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 November 2009

this regret all of us seem to have...a different kind of poem on sin

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The Lost.. 06 November 2009

a very nice poem..keep writing and wish u achieve all your hopes and wishes :)

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 05 November 2009

i felt the poem could have been expressed even more clear, and its really too short i felt words were lacking intense expressions

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Jazz Annis 05 November 2009

very nice very nice poem...but idk...it's seems as though u didn't fully describe how u felt in the poem...like u didn't really didn't write all the words u wanted to write...never hold back on a poem...if it's what u feel right down the WHOLE feeling not just bit's an parts...be true to what u write...that is what i do...=)

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Rafique Farooqi 05 November 2009

Great flow oif words, and sentimental approach......wonderful poem.....please keep on with your art.

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Obinna Eruchie 05 November 2009

When things go so bad, people usually remember God. A good message to remind one that it is good to heed to the words of God.

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Lindo Mvelase 05 November 2009

this is a good and a soulful poem and you know if our conscience conderm us we have no cnfidence before the Lord and the devil will advantage of that but if we confess we are confident to ask anything to God, a good poem indeed......can you plz read my poem 'THE FACT ABOUT LIFE' for me. thank you

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Allan O 05 November 2009

short but to the point and well written...no matter the sin god can forgive...thank you elsee :)

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Mohammed Hassan 05 November 2009

perfect poem my dear Eslee about forgiveness from the god nicely written and perfect thought you have my rate 10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 05 November 2009

One needs the armour of GOD in this life.

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Eyan Desir 04 November 2009

hahaha this poem was so funny... but you wrote this very well thank you for the invite..10s

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we are not expected to live perfect live. btu we are expected to get uo again when we fall.

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Emma Adamyan 04 November 2009

short, exhaustively and ably! ur 10

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John Knight 04 November 2009

Hi Elsee Angel - This is our common experience when we sin and fall short of God's high standard. We just want to repent in sorrow and tears. But instead of a Forgiving God we are cofronted with an Accusing Devil. But the Good Book says we 'Should resist the Devil (in the name of JESUS and the power of the HOLY SPIRIT who indwells all Believers) . The Devil will then run away from us. It also says that when we pray to God we can come 'With Assurance to God's Throne of Grace'. God does and will forgive us - whatever our sin - but it is better 'To listen to the Preachers and act on their advice! '. Every blessing in all you do - Because this Poem has a message for us all I have opened the score with a big TEN. Love in Poetry - JOHN

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* Stephen *king 04 November 2009

As you have confessed your sin I forgive them all without making din.........a good write........10+++.....

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