Sin: O( Comments

A nice write.Love to read time and again.

sin and acceptance of the same is another route to divine realization well done!

you are selected every words with very careful..nice

fantastic poem indeed nice to read

this regret all of us seem to have...a different kind of poem on sin

a very nice poem..keep writing and wish u achieve all your hopes and wishes :)

i felt the poem could have been expressed even more clear, and its really too short i felt words were lacking intense expressions

very nice very nice poem...but idk...it's seems as though u didn't fully describe how u felt in the poem...like u didn't really didn't write all the words u wanted to write...never hold back on a poem...if it's what u feel right down the WHOLE feeling not just bit's an parts...be true to what u write...that is what i do...=)

Great flow oif words, and sentimental approach......wonderful poem.....please keep on with your art.

When things go so bad, people usually remember God. A good message to remind one that it is good to heed to the words of God.

this is a good and a soulful poem and you know if our conscience conderm us we have no cnfidence before the Lord and the devil will advantage of that but if we confess we are confident to ask anything to God, a good poem indeed......can you plz read my poem 'THE FACT ABOUT LIFE' for me. thank you

short but to the point and well written...no matter the sin god can forgive...thank you elsee :)

perfect poem my dear Eslee about forgiveness from the god nicely written and perfect thought you have my rate 10+++

One needs the armour of GOD in this life.

hahaha this poem was so funny... but you wrote this very well thank you for the invite..10s

we are not expected to live perfect live. btu we are expected to get uo again when we fall.

short, exhaustively and ably! ur 10

Hi Elsee Angel - This is our common experience when we sin and fall short of God's high standard. We just want to repent in sorrow and tears. But instead of a Forgiving God we are cofronted with an Accusing Devil. But the Good Book says we 'Should resist the Devil (in the name of JESUS and the power of the HOLY SPIRIT who indwells all Believers) . The Devil will then run away from us. It also says that when we pray to God we can come 'With Assurance to God's Throne of Grace'. God does and will forgive us - whatever our sin - but it is better 'To listen to the Preachers and act on their advice! '. Every blessing in all you do - Because this Poem has a message for us all I have opened the score with a big TEN. Love in Poetry - JOHN

As you have confessed your sin I forgive them all without making din.........a good write........10+++.....