Thursday, September 6, 2012

Sin Has No Place In Pastoral Settings, Love Poems Comments

Rating: 2.2

Containing you in words was that my goal?
Sizing you to fit what space I had to give?
Writing each small part of you
did I lose the whole?
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Saadat Tahir 13 September 2012

the pastor isn't gonna be amused.... :) lovely reflective write... The question.. what ails thee? ? ? ...difficult to answer...deep questions with hardly any answer....

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 08 September 2012

A nice question is being asked at the end of poem. people have different ideas about that question, mine is no. this work is so wise and great well done my captain.

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Harriet James 06 September 2012

A wonderful reflective rhetorical write, thank you Captain

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