Monday, May 2, 2011

Sin After Sin Comments

Rating: 5.0

Help me... Take my hand, please... Dearest...
Free me from this neglected darkness,
Break this cold chain and take me far from my fears,
Hold me...Fade the sadness and dry my eye from tears,
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Sivvelyn Ohirun
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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