Thursday, October 24, 2013

Sin Comments

Rating: 4.8

A black sin cloud stain
Showers at me like rain
That was irremovable
No detergent nothing
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Fatima Obaid
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Poetheart Morgan 06 November 2013

When you say Sin i see experience of life. You can not leave without errors it is impossible. So we are all sinners but growing with that all the time. And being better persons in life.

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David Wood 04 November 2013

Very true words here. A good poem.

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