Friday, June 20, 2008

Sin Comments

Rating: 5.0

Vague as it may seem,
Intangible like a dream,
The reason for life has always been,
the acknowledgement of sin.
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John Paul Ang
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Katherine Sessor 24 June 2008

Great poem! I love they way you describe the 7 sins of thier good qualities instead of the negitive qualities. Your rhymes are flowing and not forced. This gets a 10 and goes in my faves. Kat, =)

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