Friday, July 3, 2009

Simultaneity Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m contemplating
Scratches on my laptop lid,
And the childhood scar on my hand,
And the wrinkles lining my face.
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Julia Klimenova
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And the perfume that he used to like, And the ashes of the letters burnt. I’m thinking of Self-sufficiency awesome... I can actually picture it :)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 July 2009

fine pictureque! clean composition! 10+

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Julia Klimenova

Julia Klimenova

Moscow, Russia
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