May I float
My humble boat
Another day and see
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ooops! Rob, I've seen some seas; some seas I've seen. I needn't search for more. I just hope if I'm ever set adrift on a sea, to me will float an oar (better yet, two oars, and a sailor to use them!) bri ;)
Yes, but the ocean currents may still prevail and provide for you a lively tale!
Yep, play on words, see/sea, small constructive criticism, change the last line to 'see, to sea, to sea' ;)
Very instantaneous flow of words from the bottom of your heart..a natural expression..liked this poem very much...tfs
Beautiful images and nice use of words. Thanks for sharing. : -)
A new beginning, a new day in search of new wonders, its endless, loved this poem
Yes, such an abundance of wonders! When we open our "exploring eyes" we can begin to see new wonders everywhere even right around us!
Beautifully worded. Thanks for sharing this pleasing write
My great CONGRATS for The Member Poem Of The Day on last 16 January 2023.Thank you Poem Huntert and Team for this most deserving brevity.Hasd given you THE Stars, now I include the Galaxy. Brilliant Brevity.
There is a lot to see from the shore, perhaps more. One might say we brave the sea to see distant shores! 😊
Wondrous the sight is in the wandering observation; congrats for being the poem as POD
Absolutely a brilliant poem. Belated congratulations to you dear poet Rob
A beautiful poem well expressed and crafted, worthy of being chosen as Poem Of The Day. Congratulations, Rob!
x x Thank you for the congratulations and for your contributions here!
A very hopeful poem, Simple and terse.