Thursday, June 2, 2016

Simply Nature Comments

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Simply Nature

Sitting aloft the naked summit
surveying the unbound beauty
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Annette Aitken
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Bri Edwards 10 September 2016

Ju·ras·sic jəˈrasik/ adjectiveGeology adjective: Jurassic of, relating to, or denoting the second period of the Mesozoic era, between the Triassic and Cretaceous periods. the Jurassic period or the system of rocks deposited during it. singular proper noun: Jurassic - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - just what wonders lay before our very eyes............................ i think lie not lay, though plenty of people will think i'm wrong. the verb forms of lay and lie are confusing to many, and i'm not always sure about them either! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Annette, this stupifies***** (or stupefies) me. and i don't mean it makes me stupid; been there, done that...already. ;) what stupefies me is the command of English, especially spelling, you display here whilst (hee-hee) in some other poems your command is......well, YOU KNOW! :) is someone pulling my leg? (i used an idiom) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - *****stupefy From Middle French stupéfier, from Latin stupefaciō ‎(“strike dumb, stun with amazement, stupefy”) , from stupeō ‎(“I am stunned, speechless”) (English stupid, stupor) + faciō ‎(“do, make”) . Verb stupefy ‎(third-person singular simple present stupefies, present participle stupefying, simple past and past participle stupefied) To dull the senses or capacity to think thereby reducing responsiveness; to dazzle. ======================================== yes, nature is amazing, like you and me! we are, after all, part of it. bri :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 August 2016

The naked summit! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Billsborough 09 August 2016

some sights never cease to thrill. Just over a rise on our Bowland road, just as you drop down into Lancaster, there is an incredible Panorama of Morecambe Bay and the Lakeland Fells, especially in bright sunshine. I've seen it many times but it always seems fresh. I get the same feeling from your poem. Beautifully written. tom

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Bill Cantrell 22 July 2016

Very well written, you do nature justice with this poem, I see the poetess in this poem and she and she is magical And awesome indeed!

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Christopher Tye 22 July 2016

Really wonderful poem and imaginary. Nature is the thread that sews life together.

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