Wednesday, May 28, 2014

Simply Love Her Comments

Rating: 2.5

Once more I gaze into your loving eyes
as they sparkle like pools in paradise.
Then as I give your lips a tender kiss
we both enter into that world of bliss
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Royston Allen
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Anand Brown 28 May 2014

Wow, what an amazing poem. It always a bit tricky to write double line rhyming couplet poem because you have to get the rhyming perfect. Well in this poem you did just that, and over and above the technical brilliance you tell a story, you draw in the reader you offer an honest and poetic narrative that is not too heavy but has enough depth to leave the reader speechless. Im an instant fan, well written Mr Allen.

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