Saturday, July 2, 2005

Simply For Naked Kicks! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Meet me with
A glass of wine
And with romantic poetry
Flashing like satellites
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Uriah Hamilton
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Will Barber 20 May 2006

I enjoyed this very much. A bit of mischief. I quite like a bit of mischief. Only, I hope you remembered to take the wine bottle with you when you left. The imagery - I particularly like the satellite - is wonderful. Quite a poem!

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 02 July 2005

I like the last part....very funny!

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Lamont Palmer 02 July 2005

Some nice lines in this, buddy. Keep thinking outside the box.

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