Your complex thoughts on complex issues
Can't they be expressed in simple lines?
Like water which one can drink
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I don't find words to praise u, but your writing is very beautiful message to all of us.A simple and unassuming manner in every walks of life is ever blissful.Top score.
Simplicity is the essence of a beautiful soul... well penned!
Well written poem. Complex thoughts explained in simple language is also an skill not every body is endowed with. Those who have it steal the hearts of their readers.
Many a word is vouched on simplicity and a straight style, but this poem hits the home key straight, very well said a poem Ms Ruta
A beautiful poem dear Ruta Apa.... simplicity is magnificently articulated though this nice work...10
'Like water which one can drink And quench the thirst for knowledge? What is the use of books if one cannot eat it Like an apple and digest the juice? '...is great lines indeed. Awesome poem. Enjoyed.10+++++
Like water which one can drink And quench the thirst for knowledge? - - - - - - - - - - -and in those lines lies the art of simplicity! ! ! ! !
What is the use of books if one cannot eat it Like an apple and digest the juice? Thats a different thought.Nice write.10+
excellently written - What is the use of books if one cannot eat it // Yes need simplicity every where- in writing, speaking, in daily activities, in everything as natural being nice 10++++++++++++++++++
Thank you so much for taking the time to go through my poem and for your comment!
You have taken up quite a thought provoking topic and nicely explained the beauty and power of simplicity in our writing as well as interaction with others. First two lines of the poem set the tone well. Thanks. See what you see Feel what you feel Only then will you succeed As a writer or a poet
I generally use the metaphor KISS, Keep It Short & Simple.Why complicate things? good subject and poem Ruta.
Nice to get your comment, David!