Saturday, October 29, 2011

Simple Yet Intricate Comments

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Nodoubt you gave us brain, a gift sovereign
To unveil the mysteries behind our each gain.
It enables us to reach upto definite decisions
Regarding our constitution and origin even.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2018

Oh God why did you left us perfectly imperfect In each sphere inclyding our varied emotions. You made the human mind simple yet intricate Was it thy fear for safely from his perfection...... touching expression with nice theme. A brilliant poem incisively delineated. Thanks for sharing.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 March 2016

Victory or defeat! Nice work.

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Valsa George 02 February 2016

Though man has many accomplishments, he has very many limitations too. God didn't create us perfect. As Browning believes, 'on Earth the broken arcs, in Heaven the perfect rounds'! We have to accept this. Striving for perfection is a vain attempt! A Great write that asserts this irrefutable truth !

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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