Simple Wagon Comments

The mind is such a complex paragon, with heavy loads in it as simple wagon

I feel she is near by and around Still not seen and could not be found Touches me gently when go round

The mind is such a complex paragon, with heavy loads in it as simple wagon Life is not easy to live and carry with

What do I owe to mankind and world as whole? Never appreciate any or encourage little hole.10

lovely combinations between metaphors and similes, e.g.: ''The mind is such a complex paragon, with heavy loads in it as simple wagon'' excellent poem, wonderful rhymes, lovely to read.........10+++++++++

ok, this is so nice..expressive and nice to read..allow me to send wishes to your poetry with catrina and you..both are good..goodluck...

Good poem with lovely rhythm Life is struggle. Well penned Enjoyed reading it

a good duet work. The mind is such a complex paragon, with heavy loads in it as simple wagon Life is not easy to live and carry with Walk on sharp weapon with meaning and myth --> I like it so much

may pick garbage but not as scavenger Infuse heart with sanity as kind massager.........10

Feet may crumble but not out of fear Time may be factor and brunt has to bear........10

He may has to face challenge and consequence I may make him realize to the tune and dance.........10

Life is not easy to live and carry with Walk on sharp weapon with meaning and myth.........10

Life is not easy to live and carry with Walk on sharp weapon with meaning and myth......10

It is so sensitive but not as device Respect to all wishes and to an advice.....10

It is so sensitive but not as device Respect to all wishes and to an advice.........10

i had to read it twice, because my brain is not fully absorbing it yet but it is a challenging poem.

is not simply hairs have turned gray Earth may change into fine pot and clay Feet may crumble but not out of fear.......10

The mind is such a complex paragon, with heavy loads in it as simple wagon.........10

Scraps and useless too have their values Thrown may be away but have their dues

He may has to face challenge and consequence I may make him realize to the tune and dance......10