Monday, February 10, 2014

Simple Verse. No.9. Love At First Sight Comments

Rating: 5.0

A spark lit through presence
Fanned through glance
Brightened through absence
Blazed through romance
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Valsa George
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 March 2020

A beautiful description of first love. The first real taste of pure unfettered desire. And love that always holds us spellbound. An insightful poem wonderfully written with great rhyme.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2018

'Love At First Sight' is brilliantly penned. So touching and impressive. Beautiful poem.10

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Dinesan Madathil 16 February 2014

Love at first sight is after all either blind or beyond reason If accepted, it is a folly of prudence And if and when rejected it is a bubble of despair... Love after many a sight has no tale to tell either.... If culminated in matrimony, it is a convention trespassed And if extended without that, it is a conviction imbibed. A simple verse for a high cause.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 February 2014

Extinguishing may also be caused by reticence. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 12 February 2014

Simply great love at first sight expressed so delicately..........Valsa............

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Valerie Dohren 11 February 2014

Short, succinct, well said. Love at first sight doesn't always last.

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 February 2014

Wow... A wonderful poem with beautiful rhymes. Beautiful way you have described love at first sight with few lines.. Enjoyed reading it.

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Savita Tyagi 11 February 2014

Beautiful! A walk through the mysterious world of love.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 11 February 2014

all its hues and shades, very well brought out.

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Kee Thampi 11 February 2014

touch of a soul mate....

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