Simple Verse. No.6- Simple Pleasures Comments

Fun it was to play ‘Hide n' Seek', With friends reversing the role in turn, The cop chasing the thief in hide, And the thief evading the cop in chase................impressive lines with amusing depiction and nice theme. A beautiful poem on pleasure having pleasant expression.10

What a beautiful description of a time, that has gone with the winds, But I listen to music of the gone time, who are the flowers I feel the the aroma that was lost, My grandchildren singing my forgotten rime!

Beautiful poem! Those childhood memories a treasure to keep and cherish.

Childhood is a blissful state. We enjoyed all those games and fun. But dont know how the new generation going to write on their childhood memories.....brought back the old memories..

Such inricacies of chilhood, cherished n treaaured in this poem lyrically packed....

childhood is a blissful sate dear Valsa. A simple lovely time in our lives. carefree and wonderful. nice write

Childhood reminiscences are so aptly captured in this wonderful poem, Valsa! It transported me to the golden childhood once again.The last para' is fantastic! ; Enjoyed!

Very different than I expected and bright. Thanks.

I agree with Anthony below, childhood's rich tapestry of beautiful memories. Graet poem Valsa

Simple pleasures- -yest apt title and expressive too. Small pleasures during our childhood and youth used to make a lot of difference in our lives..Little things and petty scenes, Thus filled our hearts with instant joy. Life never seemed dull or drab, With each day holding its own charm, This stanza sums up the idea of simple pleasures. Excellent poem.

Staying here on this shore of life, The other side seems greener far! ....very true! George Eliots calls it the passing of the Golden Gates! ! !

A spontaneous overflow of memories collected in tranquility and emotions well woven into the format. The beauty of a long poem has not been so pleasantly experienced quite for some time and the richness of diction is yet another thing to give you credit for madam Valsa.

ur poem made me go back to my childhood days...those days are golden days, cannot be acheived again in this lifetime by us, and they appear to be short now, but was lengthy then, as we were in a haste to reach the other side that appeared greener, which in reality is not! now i revive my childhood seeing my kids grow, as they are small now, n do all these petty naughty things, that makes them happy. As the fact of life is, they are in a haste to grow up a very nice poem mam

a lovely journey to where the valley is still green.

Bliss it was that childhood state. You recalled childhood in great detail with carefully selected words. The poem flows smoothly making it all the more delightful. Thank you.

Poetry has made me a much better thoughtful person. Thanks God for poets and poetry!