Simple Verse.No.5- Under A Peepal Tree Comments

An amazing expression has been made on a story through the peepal tree under where a person enjoys the terrific dream on a snooze. Nice penmanship with touching flow. I love this poem. Thank you for sharing here. Full vote madam.

simple but oh so lovely but I must remember to avoid peepal trees thanks valsa-10

Beautiful poem! Paints a full story. In childhood we were cautioned about Peepal tree. Rest yes! Sleep no!

This is absolutely amazing. real enlightenment. thanks for this beautiful piece.

My dear friend this is a brilliant, excellent write! Trees, I believe may have a special power, if we spare some time near them could help us connect to ourselves or even further, to our ancestors. Loved this poem, it speaks to my soul, thank you!

A striking story poem, Valsa, Under the Peepal tree, a dream within a dream! Brilliant write!

Quite a story, scary stuff, but a great read.

i was taken away with ur poem, in the dream beautifully painted by u.........

I was seriously enjoying the poem when the last stanza brought me a wide smile. Beautiful hooking poem.

Valsa Ji, it's melodramatic narrative, i would like you to visit Phantasmagoria on my page! ! !

Beautiful story, very ncley written.

Yes, life is a dream and dream under the tree is dream in dream. What he dreamed like Buddha? Saiva ashes in the Grave? Much to think.Nice.

It isn`t that simple a verse! The number '5' gives enough clue that many more intricacies are going to be blended into your ' simple verses' waiting to be penned down. The teeming of fine diction and the freshness of notions shared have played here the magic of a poetic experience for all.

Of monastic seclusion. A mysterious charm! A sedate calm! Through the above three lines you seem to have indicated what kind of thoughts will engulf the mind under a peepal tree. Beautiful free flowing poem.

I enjoyed the journey you painted Valsa.