Simple Verse.No.3 - When It Rained Comments

Hmmm...simple indeed, ..the tumult of live is preferred to d silence of d grave, ..true

The simple verse is not that simple- -it isgreat! the concluding lines hold a great truth of life! KUDOS!

When it rains again the bright sun will play hide and seek and the sky will be reverberating with the tunes of the mighty clouds in clash..... Then will there be many more pits elevated to the state of ponds! But when will it rain again for all of us?

Sure the tumult of life is preferred, Far more to the silence of the grave! well penned

Pits turned into ponds, great metaphor for the tumult of life. Good one Valsa.

I lov the simplicity of this poet.... And the small pits into ponds turned Today the sun shone bright Far brighter than ever

Rain and water are signs of life and empty ponds need to be filled again. Last couplet bears a deep philosophy-pitter patter of rain is better than silence of drought, of death.

great lines, a culmination of a philosophy: Sure the tumult of life is preferred Far more to the silence of the grave! Effortless imagism you create with ease!