Simple Verse. No.11. From Nook To Fluke Comments

Fondly lifting and cuddling me in her arms I was carried to her solitary home To begin my life anew as her friend and guard With love and freedom and life made frolicsome.....captivating expression. Beautiful poem on love and freedom is astutely executed. Thanks for sharing.

Nook And Fluke (Being inspired by Valsa George’s poem From Nook To Fluke) Happy in my concentric life, Valsa says it was a nook, A fluke brought paper and pen And I wrote a book!

Beautiful poem elaborating about the saga of some helpless pups. They await eagerly for adoption in a loving family. I love animals. Very good and uplifting write.

A great ending for our wee pup of dubious beginnings. And I love the last word happy and free 'frolicsome'

hey....is that for the animal activists....: -) ] jokes apart a great poem on these stray poor lives as orphans......a first person recitation made it more wonderful...

I am moved and absolutely happy about what you have done. This is the ultimate triumph of humanity in its finest phase, madam. I am giving a full 10 for this great share.

Brilliant work lovely verse with divinity but the two stanza superb Glory to be Allah He must be parised by praising you thanks10

This is so touching, I nearly cried but i held back lol. I love that this tells the tale of how a magnitude of dogs have lived and from their perspective! I wonder what happened to the mother dog and if shes still alive even. I hope that reading this will make more people consider adopting shelter dogs. They've had such long journey's it would be nice if they could all be as lucky as the dog in this poem. I also loved the break in this poem, the change in perspective from a third party narrator to a first person canine narrator. Honestly I cant say enough about this poem, its beautiful. So I'm adding this to favorites ^^ ~Nika

your love for the abandoned uncared animals is lovingly manifest here.

a nice story with great emotions beautiful poem indeed thanks for sharing. i love read it

Your simple verse is long and nice. Another nice story of kindness and compassion and also instance of survival of the fittest. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

From obscurity to the stroke of good luck........the delicate journey ended with a happy note for the puppy...Valsa... truly a touching one very elegantly crafted................