Simple Verse. No.10. On Wings Comments

Abruptly he announced, looking into the blue sky “Oh come! On wings of joy, we’ll fly Let us scoot over hills and skim over dales” “Tuwee! Tuwee”, in shrill delight, we flew across the sky....delightful expression. This is really a beautiful poem having dream to be a bird. Thanks for sharing.10

A beautiful poem, dreaming to become a bird shows love of beauty and nature. It's a beautiful poem I am inspired to write a poem on the birds..............10

Just read this beautiful poem of yours. What a wonderful imagination so nicely put into words! ' “Tuwee! Tuwee”, in shrill delight, we flew across the sky ' - Delighted at this new shrill, wish I could fly like you. 'One step at a time will take you miles along’ - A very inspiring line. Beautiful! Gave it a well deserved 10/10.

A lovely imagery to be on the wings. Away from the earthly things and you flew across the sky.... very nice

An unusual poem Valsa - I love birds too, but have never had a dream like this. Very inspired.

This is truly one of your best. The urge to fly whether in a dream or even while awake is one of mankind greatest wish. Your thoughts was so excellently depicted in this poem. It reminds me of my poem titled If I Could Fly. Well done again Valsa. You are gifted.

what an amazing write, , , and great imagination, , , , ,

Even I feel like flying whenever I see any bird flying :) Tuwee! Tuwee”, in shrill delight, we flew across the sky

I truly love and admire your story telling abilities, this is just lovely~ I so enjoyed this fantastical narration of becoming a bird and learning to fly. A wonderful write a usual ^^ ~Nika

A flight on the wings of fancy! A beautiful uplifting poem.

A Beautiful imagery you have created here with wonderful words. That's where the quality lies in a poem. I loved reading each lines. You have captured it very beautifully. I loved reading it.

A fine childhood fancy ending up as just a dream madam Valsa? The parrot green is handsome here and he will take you from branch to branch for ever though I doubt whether he can teach you to fly high or not. Surely he will soon be in love with you dear bird, I can feel a flutter of it. Flying across the sky you both may triumph. But don`t venture out into the scary heights at midnight. A fine poem madam... I wanted to write a different note.. that`s all

Your poem has so many sterling qualities. Enchantment, humor, pathos, but most of all creative inspiration. Beautiful piece.

The dream or rather a beginning of reality. If there`s no dream no task to be done. Dreams give us hope. The way the parrot teaches how to fly is really a way how we begin positively to learn the things. And i completely agree with Mr Pradip Chattopadhyay calling you a Bard made by God.

God has made you to be a bard. much love this flight of dream.

What a dream. It always a dream of human being to be free like a bird and your dream is genuine. Nice flight. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

Great imagery........great inspiring lines......great literary skills......Valsa....wish I could write like you............