Sunday, September 24, 2017

Simple Verse- Love's Magic Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the hush, hush silence of a twilight eve
Heard the gentle crooning of a dove
She was nestling close to her love
What thrill its lingering echo did give!
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 May 2019

With their merry crooning that resounded from far In my heart, hope's flame began burning bright I felt like swimming in the sea of delight At the thought, I would soon have my love near.......so amusing with lofty theme. Beautiful poem on love with lovely graphic that attracts me for second time.

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Loke Kok Yee 12 January 2018

Will light a fire in a loveless heart And prompt the search for a new sweetheart If the picture fails to warm your heart The poem will bring a change of heart Thanks Valsa.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 December 2017

It opened in me the inlets of delight When my heart was longing for love My blues, it did instantly shove Flaming my heart with blazing light! Magic of love melted and the poetess' heart became a mold, the outcome is here and it's a nice poem,

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Stephen Katona 04 November 2017

What a beautiful poem Valsa. Love does indeed warm the heart.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 31 October 2017

Shelley and Keats sang about skylarks and nightingale. And here our PH nightingale is singing about doves. A well-rhymed poem of beauty M'm. Please take my 10. I don't want to keep you too long here with my comment as your love is round the corner. (10)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 October 2017

Roused in me a throng of lovely sensation Making my spirit rise in elation Birds fascinate man...indeed.

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Mj Lemon 03 October 2017

I could hear the cooing as I read this great poem, Valsa. This is one of your very best.

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Glen Kappy 03 October 2017

Hi, Valsa! Inlets of light- I like this phrase! Yes, as your poem illustrates, love transforms us- even if it is simply to remind us it is in the world. Glen

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Savita Tyagi 28 September 2017

Simple pleasures of life like cooing of dove add so much delight. A heartwarming poem. Thanks Valsa.

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Nosheen Irfan 28 September 2017

A delightful write that awakens dreams in the reader too. We can see the magic in the picture you have created and those songs of the birds reverberate in our hearts. A 10.

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Simone Inez Harriman 26 September 2017

I can hear the unique acoustic sounds of the doves cooing as they cuddle together for the night in your poem. And I too feel my spirit rise in elation to see and hear them. They are truly love's magic.10+

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Josey Alfred 26 September 2017

Love lingers around every one and you have spotted it and awakened us to the reality of love. Only a simple mind at ease can get the feel of it. Well written. Thanks for shareing.

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Muhammad Ali 25 September 2017

Love is a gift for the blessed. those birds and that seer among the blessed ones. beautifully expressed delicate feelings and emotions

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Rajnish Manga 24 September 2017

Simple, sweet, soft and silent is the magic of love which impacts everyone as blissful as this playful pair of dove.... Thanks for this amazing poem, Valsa ji.

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Rajkamal P.j 24 September 2017

An excellent poem. Congrats

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Rajkamal P.j 24 September 2017

An excellent poem. Congrats.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2017

Brilliant, tender and pleasing poem is excellently penned and shared is very attractive through imagery and lovable image. In the hush, hush silence of a twilight evening gentle crooning of a dove is heard is of love and innovation. This love longs for certainty and delights mind and emotion. Throng of lovely sensation touches the spirit of love and hope. A presage of love's fruition from Heaven above is seen, felt, touched and kept near. Very beautiful presentation makes this poem special. This is an outstanding poem shared here...10

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