Monday, January 11, 2016

Simple Verse- Children- Gift From God Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bundles of joy dropped from heaven
Holding enormous possibilities
Acorns from which giant oaks grow
The hope and light of the world
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Valsa George
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 June 2022

Lovely...a beautiful poem. Top score.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2019

Bundles of joy dropped from heaven Holding enormous possibilities Acorns from which giant oaks grow The hope and light of the world The pride and possession of parents........much impressive with bright future. A brilliant poem on children, the gift of God. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem with nice graphic.10

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Siddartha Montik 22 December 2016

Or utter sugar coated words, If they harbor any dislike for you or me a Nature so clean they came from.. they Hardly know words and our Languages! Better expressed in simple words! Their simple silent utter would only be We do Cry.. Only when we are neglected! ! Thank you for sharing Poet! ! a Full Vote! !

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2016

Nice poem, relived childhood gaian...Alas, as they grow into adults Get trained in all tricks of the world! Guide and direct them in the right way Knowing they are the hope of the world And the priceless gift from God!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 January 2016

Guide them in the right direction. They will turn the future bright. Beautiful poem.

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Souren Mondal 13 January 2016

Children are indeed the best gifts one can have. Beautiful and cute to the core, innocent and naughty.. The poem reminded me of Henry Vaughan's 'The Retreat' and the 'angel infancy' he talked about.. Experience is always something that corrupts the innocence.. A wonderful poem Valsa ma'am.. Thank you for sharing.

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Shahzia Batool 13 January 2016

Beautiful poem on a universal topic..Happy new year Valsa ji. Thanks for the nice poem!

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Joseph Anderson 12 January 2016

Valsa-They truly are a gift from God.Your ability with free form and rhymning verse amases me.Splendid with it's brevity, yet deep and thorough in the telling.A precious tribute

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Hans Vr 12 January 2016

Superb poem about children. I love, love, love them. And it was such a pleasure to read this poem. The ending contains also so much wisdom. Let us not teach our children too many tricks and let ourselves also be still a bit (or a lot) child.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 12 January 2016

..as they grow into adults get trained in all tricks of the world True, very nicely penned.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 January 2016

Alas, as they grow into adults Get trained in all tricks of the world! i think parents are responsible for it, a great poem.

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Raymond Farrell 12 January 2016

Beautiful poem and highly instructive. Thanks for sharing it.

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Kelly Kurt 12 January 2016

My six children are all adults now but still a joy.

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Spock The Vegan 11 January 2016

Wonderful. Children are the future...10

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