Simple Verse- 27.Take A Day Off Comments

So much nature spilled.. ake a stroll along the sandy shore Feel the kiss of the salubrious air Listen to the roar of wild waves Watch how the water in anger raves Feel the Kisses of that Air and listen to enjoy Waves and their Roar! Nice write Thank you Poet! ! 10+++! !

nice one - yes we all need a break from the hectic life routine - go for an outing with whom you enjoy company - breath the refreshed air and have some time for ourselves. a gud write Mam.

A nice piece of advice and so very well penned. Even though all of us may be aware of this escape route from the drudgery of grinding strife we still fail to come out of the gloomy den where we find ourselves locked in. A ver meaningful advice, Valsa.

We all need a rest in life at times. Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Nice piece of advice, one should take moments to enjoy...work, work, work no play and enjoyment makes Jack a dull boy..Well said madam.

Occasionally taking a moment to read such a marvelous poem is very amazing definitely listening to roar of wild waves. Very wise and amazing poem shared here interestingly...10

There is no sense in worry, it solves nothing ands elf replicates. Time off, to clear the mind and focus on beauty, can be a wonder drug.

A soothing poem with beautiful rhyme imbedded in it. Enjoyed the bits of advice delivered. Thank you.

Yes we all need occasional break from the daily grinding of life and seek calmness in the lap of nature to rejuvenate ourselves.Nice poem.

Once in a while we should just let go of the usual business of the day to take pleasure in the simple, lazy moments that life offers.. But very few can appreciate solitude, most of us feel lonely, even in a crowd or amidst friends... A beautiful poem ma'am.. Thank you for sharing..

Occasionally steal a moment to enjoy Look at life in a spirit of joy That should be the spirit. So much joy is there to be discovered in umpteen things around us but what we need is a moment away from the dreariness of our lives. Lovely poem. Thanks.

Yes, we need a recess from the fatigues of day to day routines. We must have a day for rest and recreation.

Nicely penned and much wisdom here thanks