Simple Verse- 26- Gift Comments
I had fallen in love with her at first sight
A six year old with eyes wet with dewy tears
Her slight brown hair was tied at the back into a ponytail
On her face was the pain of desertion
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The need for love in our world is so immense, there should be no room for hate. A great gift indeed. Thank you, Valsa.
A correction if you permit.. You let in a flash of bliss. What a beautiful poem. Again 10.
A cute lovable little girl meets a compassionate soul. Love emanates and spreads around. The poem is a beauty.
Is any gift better than love, for a wounded dove, Knick knacks for an orphan bird that brought smiles on her face, Was a Valsa's supplement, to the gift a glace, to Valsa a grace. A beautiful poem Valsa! ..............................10
wat a sense of satisfaction and pride we feel wen v bring joy into the lives of such kids who are either orphans are are abandoned by their own people - a very nice n touchy poem Mam
Very touching aspect of the lives of orphans has been depicted by a very sensitive human being in the form of a beautiful poem. It is insightful and thought provoking too. Thanks for sharing.
You described yourself so clear and well Your kindness from your poem all can tell Thanks Valsa
What a Love! ! ! ! What a poem and what an expression, loved everything you described so perfectly... I watched the twinkle in her little eyes As she opened it with her fumbling hands Curiosity peeked on her tender face and eyes When finally took out the glossy frilled frock
You kissed her tears away. and you had mine rolling down. this poem is itself a gift to all who Open it. And Read it. This gift is special - as it is wrapped in sharing and kindness. and the words has special effects too; because the one who reads can pass on this gift.
Thank you Rupa...... Only a compassionate heart can find beauty in this poem!
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It is so touchingly portrayed on an orphan, her appearance and her curiosity. When you offer her a parcel colorfully wrapped and tied with a ribbon, she opens with her fumbling hands and a mark of curiosity peeked on her face and eyes is found. When she opens it, her face glows with excitement and joy. You have so kind heart madam, We should have love towards orphans. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared.