Simple Verse.25. Mother Hen And Her Little Chicks Comments

May be failing once. But the predators are victorious in the next chance. The hen has a language of sounds to teach and warn its babies. How this large family goes around in a group with fun is beautifully described!

Brilliant. Poem with a story. Bubbly and bouncy words, keeping me engrossed until the end; of course hoping that the chicks will not be eaten this time (unlike the Tommy who eat the eggs) . Very interesting. You come out with diverse writing. Going to add to my favourites. Going to add the Tommy cat too. LOVED IT.

Beautifully written, a story that is the mystery of nature in all it's different colours as instinct to survive is so powerful.

The Mother hen with her happy brood speaks about wonderful sense of humor in this interesting sharing really. Nature equips both the parties to be the victor! Very wise, interesting and excellent sharing....10

Wonderful keen observation and from it the conclusion, Life is a game between the predator and prey And nature equips both the parties to be victor.! Enjoyed reading the verse. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful rendering of chicken and her family on a first day out. Careful and close observations are wonderfully captured in the poem. You followed it with a nice picture. I wonder is the picture first or the poem.

Wonderful word play.Enjoyed reading .created a vivid picture of the hen and the chicks and the poem ends on a thought to ponder on.Thanks .Yet another hit.

Nature provides for all who are willing to learn Thanks Valsa-10

A fun read. Thanks, Valsa.