Simple Verse.23. Beggars - All Comments

What a wonderful poem. A poem of kindness, empathy and deep faith in God. It conveys a powerful message that we are all equal. A heartwarming write that touches the heart. Excellent poem.Beautifully conveyed and crafted. Onto my Poem List.

Can I ever discriminate him When we both do the same thing While he begs before me outside the shrine I beg before the Lord inside the shrine! ..........so moving and here is the essence of the poem. A brilliant poem is shared here astutely.10

We are all the same just different situations, we all need to be loved and we need God's mercy to wash away our sins, to belong to God is to live life with joy in our hearts! Superb write!

Inside or outside, there is God. You prayed to the formless inside the shrine and placed your wants before Him. The beggar prayed to the one in form, you. To him, the giver of alms is God personified. We can't move about bumping into the God every second of our life wherever we are. Beautiful poem. (10)

The last verse is really fantastic..The inward and outward eyes are nondiscriminatory! !

Spiritual and universal, this verse is a calling to all who seek the righteous path. With your words you have embedded true humility in my heart and shown me that with humbleness I should pray to God. Everyone deserves respect without bias no matter their station as in the end we truly are 'Beggars All'.

Can I ever discriminate him When we both do the same thing While he begs before me outside the shrine I beg before the Lord inside the shrine! ...... yes, there is no difference between individuals. We are all beggars in front og God. So nicely envisioned and aptly presented. Best phraseology. Thanks for sharing such intensive poem. .....10

Hats off. Self realization is the best education and your poem has displayed that the real(spiritual) education has been amply achieved by you. Our mythology calls it Search of the real self.(Ko aham- Who am I) . Ratnakar Mandlik

truly amazing words - we all are beggars in some way or other - bow before Thy God and seek his blessings inside the shrine - outside the shrine a beggar begs and earns money with the Almightys blessings.

There is no differences between individuals. Differences are all created by man. Beautifully simple and simply beautiful poem.

Yes, Valsa We all are beggars before Him. A really impressive poem.........................10

Wow wow wow the last lines were esp creatively superb. The whole poem was great to read, inspiring prayer n charity, how they should go together yes. Thumbs up.