Friday, June 19, 2015

Simple Verse.21. To My Little Daughter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh my sweetie
My little cutie
Why do you fret?
Why can’t you be smart?
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Mahtab Bangalee 16 March 2020

Be a good baby Eat this yummy candy On your little face Let me plant a kiss/// sweetly penned; enjoyable for every mother with her child

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Lyn Paul 27 June 2015

Such uplifting words to make any mother feel that they will be able to settle their young ones. Beautiful. Could add music and sing it to bub.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 27 June 2015

Lovely as the cute baby. Loved reading it

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Beautiful, Valsa-ji. The mother in you in pure eloquent love. (10)

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Rajesh Thankappan 24 June 2015

This sweet poem is effusing a mother's love and concern for her little one. Beautifully sculpted.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 June 2015

Valsa, it's sweet, sweet and sweet..................10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 June 2015

Sweet poem for the cute one.

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Hans Vr 20 June 2015

lovely and sweet Sooo nice

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Kavya . 19 June 2015

too good...loved it Mam

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 19 June 2015

It brought tears to my eyes! So sweet and soothing!

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 19 June 2015

Such a simple and nice poem. This would actually sound so sweet if someone put a note to it too. Why do tears trickle? Drop your frown On my lap, you sit down Mothers always do that.

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