Simple Verse.20. A Robin's Nest Comments

The mama enjoyed their sweet company To her, boredom no more came to annoy The nest rang with a chorus of song It became vibrant with a happy throng....touching expression of love of a mother bird to her birdlings. A beautiful poem with nice graphic is well executed. Thanks for sharing.

I'm a sucker for nature, simple yes but so meaningful. Thanks Valsa!

Loved the imagery, it left a warm feeling inside for the mama and her babies.

The keen observation and closeness to nature is what reflects out of this juvenile write up, i must call it so as it can be recited to the kids who dream of life with open eyes...here instincts and impulses are presented as love and emotion...enjoyed a light read after a gap! thanks Valsa ji!

Picture is superb and matches with the poem. Liked it.

Beautiful poem Valsa. Words are flowing so sweetly that I read each lines slowly and relishingly. I wrote a similar poem, while writing I felt sad, when at last the nest lay empty. This is the truth about life also. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

A sweet poem to read and enjoy. Nice tempo in the poem with precise rhyming.

Amazing rhyming and a beautifully written poem with a wonderful picture, the vivid picture you have painted into delightful lines of their entry into the world and their first flight.

This poem is a beauty simply told. You excel with simple themes. Again, children are going to love this well-rhymed piece. (10)

Wonderful imagery. Excellent phraseology. Nice descriptiooon with beautiful picture. I enjoyed both poem and picture. Many thanks for sharing......10

Very insightful write. Similar thought is conceiving my mind. your poem inspired me to bring it down on paper. Thanks for share. Regards.

A wonderful insightful empathetic joyful rendezvous through nature! Well done my friend.