Simple Verse.18.Reparation Comments

My mind so tangled and messy earlier Became suddenly calm and slow When I felt his hand upon my brow, From my eyes, tears of joy began to flow! .....so touching and impressive. Where there is love there is joy. Reparation brings love and joy. Beautifully inscribed.

Love has a slower but surer pace.. The magical effect of love upon human minds is indelible. A poem that is notable for its purpose and perpetuity of theme. Thank you Valsa madam for this sharing.

Without reparation life will be very hard indeed.

Callous words draw tears and cause so much pain, but the touch of love, of forgiveness, draws embalming love. Loving can be a painful experience at times but with it comes the mystical healing that is deep and profound. A portray of love. Beautifully written.

The speaker has been deeply hurt by a man who simply doesn't understand the impact of his. This isn't the kind of disagreement over household or even family issues, but something which, as she tells us, affected her on the heart level. So she needs healing, and part of that should be an apology, or some kind of awareness by him. But that will not happen yet. This man needs a compassionate couselor who weill help understand - well, you know well enough. The surprise of the poem is that sleep and her psychological reflection and some undefined spiritual current heal her by the next day so that she is well, balanced and poised the next morning. But there are unresolved issues!

wonderfully presented the rationality of human mind...great work

Mind becomes suddenly calm and slow with stability in love expressed and realized in affection. Wonderful presentation with personal feelings. Beautiful one.

It is very important that we cultivate in us the habit of forgiving and forgetting. A brilliant poem, as always, from Valsa ji touching upon the mundane affairs of life.10/10

It is very important that we cultivate in us the habit of forgiving and forgetting. A brilliant poem, as always, from Valsa ji touching upon the mundane affairs of life.10/10

It is very important that we cultivate in us the habit of forgiving and forgetting. A brilliant poem, as always, from Valsa ji touching upon the mundane affairs of life.10/10

It is very important that we cultivate in us the habit of forgiving and forgetting. A brilliant poem, as always, from Valsa ji touching upon the mundane affairs of life.10/10

This is very poignant indeed and so wonderfully crafted with loving and kind words would definitely bring peace and calmness to a grieving soul while reading this great piece penned with elegance......Valsa.....sometimes kind gesture does wonders.....10/10

A heart touching poem. Loved the metaphor. Our lives full with friction but a loving and kind gesture erases the pain like magic. Thanks for sharing.

Heart touching poem. Our lives full with little frictions. A loving kind gesture erases the pain like magic. Loved the metaphor. Thank you for sharing.

I can relate to this one, it does happen, kind words and kind gesture can help to ameliorate ill feelings and erase sour moments of past, thanks for sharing :)

A poet becomes a magician when his reader starts seeing himself in a poem. Several times it happened that I saw my personal life in the poems of Valsa. I have started believing Valsa is a great magician or one may say a true poetess of life..................10